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	<title>Comments on: Second draft is done</title>
	<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/</link>
	<description>musings, thoughts, and writings of Barbara W. Klaser</description>
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 		<title>Comment on Second draft is done by: A novel idea &#187; Other people&#8217;s second drafts</title>
		<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-4879</link>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Dec 2006 10:25:52 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>[...] Barbara W. Klaser completely re-wrote her second draft, even changing point-of-view characters. We&amp;#8217;ve done that before. Quite dramatic changes can happen. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[	<p>[&#8230;] Barbara W. Klaser completely re-wrote her second draft, even changing point-of-view characters. We&#8217;ve done that before. Quite dramatic changes can happen. [&#8230;]
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 		<title>Comment on Second draft is done by: Barbara W. Klaser</title>
		<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-1346</link>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Dec 2005 23:10:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>[...] 	 	 			To answer some of your comments, I&amp;#8217;m much happier with the characters in this second draft, and I think they&amp;#8217;ll continue to grow, which is imp [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[	<p>[&#8230;] 	 	 			To answer some of your comments, I&#8217;m much happier with the characters in this second draft, and I think they&#8217;ll continue to grow, which is imp [&#8230;]
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 		<title>Comment on Second draft is done by: Reenie</title>
		<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-1332</link>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Dec 2005 17:32:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Congrats! When I wrote my extensive second draft, I had a blast. I had dreaded the chore, but was startled by the new places I went - especially with POV.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[	<p>Congrats! When I wrote my extensive second draft, I had a blast. I had dreaded the chore, but was startled by the new places I went - especially with POV.
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 		<title>Comment on Second draft is done by: Rhubarb</title>
		<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-1322</link>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Dec 2005 04:01:20 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-1322</guid>
					<description>Zounds and egad!  Rewrite on second draft.  No mean accomplishment.  Hope you are satisfied with it.  If you are, we, your readers, will be, also.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[	<p>Zounds and egad!  Rewrite on second draft.  No mean accomplishment.  Hope you are satisfied with it.  If you are, we, your readers, will be, also.
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 		<title>Comment on Second draft is done by: susan</title>
		<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-1321</link>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Dec 2005 21:09:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Yes, this must feel good!  Do you have a trusted reader go through it as well?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[	<p>Yes, this must feel good!  Do you have a trusted reader go through it as well?
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 		<title>Comment on Second draft is done by: Eric Mayer</title>
		<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-1320</link>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Dec 2005 19:03:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Excellent. T'is the season to complete novels. It is wrenching to finish a book isn't it? Almost like you have to suddenly step out of a world you've been spending so much time in. Leave it behind, return to reality. Wrenching and kind of sad.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[	<p>Excellent. T&#8217;is the season to complete novels. It is wrenching to finish a book isn&#8217;t it? Almost like you have to suddenly step out of a world you&#8217;ve been spending so much time in. Leave it behind, return to reality. Wrenching and kind of sad.
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 		<title>Comment on Second draft is done by: Ken</title>
		<link>http://barbarawklaser.mysterynovelist.com/2005/12/02/second-draft-is-done/#comment-1319</link>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Dec 2005 05:22:16 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Excellent!  In this revision, how do you feel about the characters?  Do you think they're as real with emotion as in Shadows Fall?  Were any of the characters carried over from either of your prior works?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[	<p>Excellent!  In this revision, how do you feel about the characters?  Do you think they&#8217;re as real with emotion as in Shadows Fall?  Were any of the characters carried over from either of your prior works?
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